Can you just tell me your opinion on this paper on tundra climate? Can you also check spelling and grammar? One last thing, I would appreciate it if you told me what grade level this paper should be.
The winter temperatures average about -30 F throughout most of the Arctic including the North Pole. The coldest weather is in northeastern Siberia. Their January temperature averages -40 F, and have fallen to -93 F. Most other parts of Siberia and the sub arctic parts of Canada, Central Asia and central Alaska have average winter temperatures of about -20 F. The mildest winters are in the regions on the coast of the Pacific Ocean, where January temperatures average about 30 F.
These same regions have mild summers, with average temperatures of about 45 F. The warmest summers occur in Siberia, Canada, and Alaska. July temperatures there average around 60 F. Weather stations have recorded temperatures of 90 F and above in these regions.
Rainfall in many arctic regions total six to ten inches a year, including melted snow. This is less rain than some of the best known deserts! Much of the arctic has fog and rain in the summer. Although the arctic regions have low annual rainfall, arctic lands may have very wet ground because water evaporates slowly. There is also alot of permafrost which makes the ground hard to dig and farm.
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This sentence has a subject-verb agreement problem and a punctuation problem in it:
Their January temperature averages -40 F, and have fallen to -93 F.
Do you see both problems?
sub-arctic (needs a hyphen)
"...Central Asia and central Alaska" (need lower-case "c" on "Central" and a comma after "Asia")
There's no such word as "alot"!! How will you fix this?
Content sounds fine although a science tutor may have additional comments.
Would "Their January temperature averages -40 F, but have fallen to -93 F" work??
Thanks alot for the corrections!
Yes, your revision of that sentence is correct.
Now ... how will you fix "alot"??
a lot?
"a lot" is still rather imprecise, especially after you've given all those numbers in temperatures.
Could you say "at least 36 inches of permafrost" or some other precise number?
sure thanks
it's ok but you need to focous more on tundra climate.
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