What would my topic sentence be for this paragraph that I have been working on? Because my points are overpopulation, economics, and religion.
I have another ?. Pro-war and economics. I already expanded on the creation of more jobs due to the need of providing the soldiers with the basic equipment that they would need for war. What is one more thing.
Another point for economics is that a war employs lots of men and women in the armed services.
Companies that sell goods to the government usually make good profits, too.
What do you mean by companies that sell goods to the government usually make good profits too. I also don't understand your first point.
In peacetime, a country doesn't need as many soldiers, sailors and marines as it does in wartime. Thus more people are employed to do the actual fighting.
Look up the word profit in a dictionary.
I understand that profit means gaining money from or derive a benefit from. So would it be something like this.
Companies that sell goods to the government usually make good profits too. Since the item that is being produced is in high demand and more are being produced, the beneficary outcome would be those manufacturers recieving a reasonable payback.
To construct a topic sentence for your paragraph discussing overpopulation, economics, and religion, it is important to find the common thread that ties these three points together. Considering your topic sentence should provide an overarching idea that encompasses all three aspects, it could be something like: "The interconnected factors of overpopulation, economics, and religion play a significant role in shaping societal structures and dynamics."
For your second question about pro-war and economics, if you have already expanded on the creation of more jobs, you can consider another angle to explore. One additional aspect to consider could be the impact of increased military spending on the overall economy. Thus, a potential topic sentence for your paragraph may be: "Beyond job creation, the relationship between pro-war sentiments and economics also delves into the broader economic implications of increased military expenditure."
Remember to incorporate your points and expand on each idea in the subsequent paragraphs to provide support for your topic sentences.