this is kinda similar to last nights question
We have to write an introduction, thesis, and now part of the body
My topic was if I could do anything without getting in trouble, what would it be?
My introduction is life is a risk itself, can you imagine how adventurous it would be if we could do anything without getting in trouble? A lot of laws would be broken a lot more people would be at harm, but having the ability to get away with just about anything is a risk I would love to take.
(Rhetorical question, anectote)
My Thesis is without getting in trouble my life would be more fun.
how did those sound
then for the other part of my thesis it says a list of main points to be discussed (a preview) A. keywords
b. keywords.
Then for the body we got to make a complete transitional sentence main point
whats that stuff mean?
That means that one you go from one paragraph to another you want to use a transition word to help the flow of your paper. So far sounds good keep going!!!
Your introduction sounds engaging and sets the tone for an interesting discussion on the topic. Here's a breakdown of the different components and how to approach the other parts:
1. Introduction:
- You have provided a thought-provoking opening statement that captures the reader's attention by highlighting the excitement and adventure of being able to do anything without consequences.
- You briefly acknowledge the potential negative impact of such a scenario, setting up the balancing act between freedom and responsibility.
2. Thesis statement:
- Your thesis statement, "Without getting in trouble, my life would be more fun," clearly states your main argument.
- It indicates that you will be discussing how a life without repercussions would enhance enjoyment and thrill.
3. Preview of main points (body):
- A list of main points or a preview is a way to outline the specific arguments or subtopics you will address in the body paragraphs.
- In this case, you could list two or three main points that support your thesis statement. It will provide an outline for the rest of your essay.
- Use keywords or brief phrases to summarize those main points. They should signal what aspect of a trouble-free life you will be discussing.
4. Complete transitional sentence main point:
- A transitional sentence is a statement that connects one paragraph or main point to the next.
- It clarifies how the following paragraph relates to the overall argument while maintaining a smooth transition.
- For example, if one of your main points is about the freedom to travel anywhere without restrictions, your transitional sentence could be: "Not being bound by laws and regulations, the ability to explore any corner of the world would open up endless possibilities."
Remember, the main purpose of an essay is to support and develop your thesis statement through coherent and logical arguments. Each paragraph should focus on one main point, and the transitional sentences create a flow between these points for a cohesive essay.