Okay I need to know which readability formula fit each one of these Scenarios. Scenario 1: The trip scheduled for Mexico during spring break has been cancelled due to the bankruptcy of the bus company. You must tell 25 of your classmates that the trip has been cancelled and that they have lost their $100 deposit. How will you convey the infomation and still uphold their goodwill toward you? Scenario 2: Your local bank made a mistake on your printed checks. Additionally the bank charged you for the checks, even though this order was supposed to be complimentary for customers opening a new account. How would you draft a letter that allows your irritation to work for, rather than against you?

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Here are some links to help you with readability levels:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flesch-Kincaid_Readability_Test
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http://www.literacytrust.org.uk/campaign/SMOG.html
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You can find more if you go to www.google.com and enter readability levels.

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please help me with a formula

Did you read the articles at those links? There are formulae there.

Yes, I understand that you are looking for the readability formulas that would be suitable for each of the given scenarios. However, readability formulas are typically used to measure the difficulty of a text, rather than to choose a specific formula for a particular scenario. The formulas can help you determine the reading level of a text, which can be useful for ensuring that your message is clear and easily understood by your intended audience.

For Scenario 1, where you need to inform your classmates about the cancelled trip and the loss of their $100 deposit, it is important to convey the information clearly and sensitively. A suitable formula to consider for this scenario could be the Flesch-Kincaid readability test. This formula calculates a readability score based on sentence length and word difficulty. You would aim for a lower score, indicating easier readability.

For Scenario 2, where you want to draft a letter expressing your irritation about the bank's mistake and charges, while still maintaining a professional tone, another relevant formula could be the SMOG readability formula. This formula measures the number of polysyllabic words in a text and estimates the years of education required to understand it. In this case, you may want to target a higher readability level to ensure your frustration is communicated effectively.

To calculate the readability score using these formulas, you can use online tools or word processing software that provides readability statistics. You can also find more information about these formulas by visiting the links you mentioned, such as the Wikipedia page on Flesch-Kincaid Readability Test or the SMOG formula page on the Literacy Trust website.

Remember, the readability formulas are just tools to help you assess the difficulty of your writing. It's important to also consider the content, tone, and style of your message to ensure it is appropriate for your intended audience and achieves your desired outcome.