Could you please correct my essay?

The magic carpet
Once very hot day, I was looking for my criket bat down in the basement. I saw a beautiful colourful carpet was lying in the coner of the room as I came closer suddenly the carpet jumped! It moved and flied off into the air then a loud booming voice came from the carpet.
"Welcome O Master. I am a magic carpet and I am at your services"
I quickly ran upstairs and told Bryan, my younger brother. We both were very excited and decided to visit India. The magic carpet and us flied high up into the sky and landed in Delhi, the capital of India. There we saw a magnificient castle which belong to King Olama. King Olama was a tyrant ruler and most of the people of India despites him.
The weather was very humid but nice and sunny so we agreed to visit one of their famous market. At the market there were lots of people in their custom costumes and all the foods displayed are very interesting. We get to try some foods especialy their popular India curry chicken and it was delicious.
Then we flied passed a huge Budda statue, looking down we saw some monks praying in the temple.
The sky got dark so we flied back home, thanks to the magic carpet we both had a wonderful adventure.

One, not once. cricket not criket. carpet was lying = carpet lying... room as = this is a run-on sentence. Either use a period or semicolon = room. As... flied off = flew off... air then = another run-on = air. Then... services" = usually singular and you need end punctuation = service."

and us flied = "us" is an object and you need a subject = and we flew... belong = belonged (past tense) despites him.= despied (past tense as he is no longer living, right?)

market. = needs to be plural = markets. foods = possible, although this word is usually singular = food there were lots of people = this sets the scene for telling your story in the past tense, so foods were (or food was), We got to try (also past tnese) ... especially (spelling is off)...Indian curry = an adjective (Indian) not a noun (India)

Then we flew past a huge...statue. Looking (another run-on sentence)

so we flew back home and thanks (instead of another short sentence, you can often combine a run-on sentence with something like "and, but, etc."

It's an interesting story but you should skip lines or indent for each paragraph, work on spelling and grammar.

Sra

The Magic Carpet

Once on a very hot day, I was searching for my cricket bat in the basement. As I approached the corner of the room, I noticed a beautiful, colorful carpet. However, to my surprise, the carpet suddenly jumped up and began flying through the air. It was at that moment that I heard a booming voice coming from the carpet, saying, "Welcome, O Master. I am a magic carpet and I am here to serve you."

Excitedly, I ran upstairs to tell my younger brother, Bryan, about the magical carpet. We both couldn't contain our excitement and decided to embark on an adventure to India. With the magic carpet guiding us, we soared high up into the sky and eventually landed in Delhi, the capital city of India.

In Delhi, we were awestruck by a magnificent castle that belonged to King Olama. However, we soon discovered that King Olama was a tyrant ruler and was despised by most of the people in India. Nevertheless, the weather was humid yet nice and sunny, so we agreed to explore one of India's famous markets.

As we strolled through the market, we witnessed a vibrant spectacle of people dressed in their traditional costumes. The various foods on display caught our attention, and we couldn't resist trying some of the popular Indian curry chicken, which turned out to be delicious.

Continuing our journey on the magic carpet, we flew past a colossal Buddha statue. When we looked down, we could see monks praying in a temple, adding a sense of tranquility to our adventure.

As the sky started to darken, we decided it was time to head back home. Thanks to the magic carpet, we had an unforgettable and wonderful adventure in India.