can someone edit my body paragraph thanks :
The senate has important jobs that not many people know about. One of them is to disapprove or approve any piece of government legislation; with the help of the House of Commons. As well the senates investigate political and social issues that Canada faces. Over the past years the senates have investigated poverty, aging, unemployment, the mass media, science policy, land use, national defense, Canadian-American relations, constitutional affairs, the decriminalization of marijuana, health care system and much more. As well the senates offer a voice to the provinces. So if someone says that senate’s have no real job then they should investigate and find the truth, because without the senate’s the government would not be what it has become today.
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