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What is a senate? A senate is the upper house of the legislature. It is also know as the red chamber. The senate’s job is to undertake in-depth inquiries into issues. Many people argue against and for the senate this is an important issue because this decides whether the senators should be elected or appointed (and by whom) what regions groups or people they should represent; and what powers they should have.Some people would favor the senate because it is organized; it gives voice to many provinces, it is responsible. The Senates does have important jobs one of them is hosting the Speech from the Throne. A hand full of people would argue that the senate should be abolished because the senates do nothing. For example, the senates don’t have a voice when bills are passed, they can express there opinion but it in reality it will not be taken into consideration. What has the senate done for Canada? I believe that the best position is to abolish the senate.
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Paragraphing? There seem to be three paragraphs here. Be sure to make the proper separations.
You'll need to work on avoiding vague references that are almost always caused by the indiscriminate use of "it" and "people" and "some" (etc.).
Get a handle on run-ons; make sure you always write in complete sentences. Also get a handle on the uses of commas and semicolons and when to use each one.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/semicolon.htm
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A senate is the upper house of the legislature. In the context of this discussion, it refers to the Canadian Senate. The Canadian Senate is also known as the red chamber, due to the red color of its seats. The main role of the senate is to undertake in-depth inquiries into issues. However, there is ongoing debate about the role and effectiveness of the senate.
The issue of the senate is important because it determines whether senators should be elected or appointed, and by whom. It also deals with questions about which regions, groups, or people the senate should represent, and what powers they should have.
Some people argue in favor of the senate because they believe it is organized, gives voice to many provinces, and is responsible in its duties. The senate does have important tasks, one of them being hosting the Speech from the Throne.
However, there are also people who argue for the abolition of the senate. They believe that the senate does not have a significant impact or influence in the legislative process. They argue that for example, the senate does not have a voice when bills are passed, and their opinions are not taken into consideration.
As for what the senate has done for Canada, it can be a subjective question with differing opinions. Some might believe that the senate has played a crucial role in the legislative process, while others might argue that its impact has been minimal.
Ultimately, the question of whether to abolish the senate or not is a matter of personal opinion. It is up to individuals to weigh the arguments and make their own decision.