Is this a good thesis:


Throught "The Window's Lament in Springtime" the speaker sybolizes the widows' wallow in sorrow from the passing of her late husband and her struggles of being able to move forward without him.

...Is there this one focus or do I have to take things out? Because I thought that a thesis is supposed to keep the reader on one topic and that's it..I'm just not sure if this is right.

Your thesis statement does focus on one main topic, which is the speaker's symbolic representation of a widow's sorrow and struggles in "The Window's Lament in Springtime." However, it seems quite lengthy and could be refined to make it more concise and impactful.

Here's a revised version that maintains the focus on the topic while being clearer and more concise:

"In 'The Window's Lament in Springtime,' the speaker symbolizes the sorrow and struggles of a widow coping with the loss of her husband."

By restructuring your thesis statement this way, you maintain the central focus on the widow's grief and struggles, but without unnecessary details that could clutter the statement. Remember, a thesis statement should capture the main idea of your paper in one or two sentences, so it's important to be succinct while still conveying your intended message.