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Revise the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, her least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success.
To revise the paragraph for correct pronoun agreement, we need to ensure that the pronouns match the correct antecedents. Here is the revised paragraph:
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, which is their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
The revisions include:
1. Replacing "her" with "their" to match the plural noun "Katie and Jill" in the first sentence.
2. Replacing "her" with "they" to match the plural noun "Katie and Jill" in the second sentence.
3. Replacing "you" with "she" to match the singular noun "Sam" in the third sentence.
4. Replacing "her" with "she" to match the singular noun "Sam" in the third sentence.
5. Replacing "she" with "they" to match the plural noun "Brynn and Avery" in the fifth sentence.
6. Replacing "her" with "their" to match the plural noun "everyone" in the last sentence.
It's always essential to ensure that pronouns agree in number and gender with their antecedents when revising sentences.
Revise the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, her least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success. im soo dump