Rewrite the paragraph so that all subjects and verbs agree.
The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. (2 points)
Revise the following paragraph for correct pronoun agreement.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, her least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does her part, the pep rally will be a success. (2 points)
The relative pronoun "that" is used with an essential clause and the relative pronoun "which" is used with a nonessential clause. In three to five sentences, explain when to use each pronoun and the difference between the two relative clauses. (2 points)
Rewrite the following paragraph, replacing commas with semicolons where they are needed.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will be opening downtown. The deli will offer free tastings of their most popular sandwiches on Friday, May 10, Saturday, May 11, and Sunday, May 12. The samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a wrap with roasted vegetables and hummus, the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll, and the famous B.L.T., made with bacon, lettuce, and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations including Boston, Massachusetts, Brooklyn, New York, and Portland, Maine. (2 points) Please Help. I have tried doing this for 3 days, my mom wont go through it with me. And the sentences is the only thing im stuck on. i need to get my Language Grade Up Quickly. Before it become and F.
Heres the second one. all fixed
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive was Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
This summer, a popular sandwich shop called Mark’s Deli will be opening downtown. The deli will offer free tastings of their most popular sandwiches on Friday, May 10; Saturday, May 1; and Sunday, May 12. The samples will include mouth-watering bites of the Veggie Deluxe, a wrap with roasted vegetables and hummus; the Italian Combo, a selection of Italian meats and cheeses on a roll; and the famous B.L.T., made with bacon, lettuce, and tomato on toasted rye bread. Mark’s Deli already has several other locations including Boston, Massachusetts; Brooklyn, New York; and Portland, Maine.
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Corrected! Do you see the corrections I made? Do you understand them?
The PTA agreed to fund a fall field trip. The seventh-grade class vote on the destination. Some vote for the zoo, others vote for the museum. After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner. Fixed it.
Most of this is correct. Errors are in bold.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing up the balloons, their least favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or it won't float. On the other side of the gym, Sam is practicing the cheer routine. if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive was Brynn and Avery with the shirts to give away. As long as everyone does their part, the pep rally will be a success.
I have already tried it was wrong.
This is what i wrote. So This is a clause that generally modifies a noun, or a noun phrase and is often introduced by a relative pronoun. Like the words which, that, who, whom, whose. who, whom, that* refers to human. which, that** refers to something thats not human, And whose is Possessive. A nonessential clause is When a sentence has a nonessential adjective clause, the clause is set apart with commas.
Consider each sentence separately. (Seeing all the sentences in paragraph form can be overwhelming.)
Here's how:
The PTA agree to fund a fall field trip.
The seventh-grade class vote on the destination.
Some votes for the zoo, others vote for the museum.
After the vote, the student council announces that the zoo is the winner.
In each sentence, locate the subject. Indicate whether it's singular or plural.
Then locate each sentence's verb. If the subject is singular, is its verb singular? If not, fix it.
If the subject is plural, is its verb plural? If not, fix it.
I Changed their to There. <~~No. What word is "their" trying to refer to?
It to they <~~Right
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was to were <~~Right