1 Charities nowadays are using a new type of fundraising idea. They plan an attractive expedition
or trip and ask participants to pay to join in. Some of this money pays for the trip itself but some is
kept by the charity to support its other work.
Imagine that you have seen the advertisement printed on the following page and have decided
that you would like to take part in ‘Bike the Nile’.
Write the script of a conversation between you and your parents in which you ask their
permission to go on the trip and also ask them to help you raise the £1000 payment
required.
In your script you should:
• briefly explain what ‘Bike the Nile’ involves
• persuade your parents that it is both a safe and worthwhile activity for you to take part in and
for them to support.
Base your ideas on the material found in the advertisement. Add your own details and opinions to
make the conversation more persuasive.
You should write about 1 ½ – 2 sides, allowing for the size of your handwriting.
Start your script:
Me: Mum, Dad I’ve just seen an advertisement for the most amazing trip.
Dad: Oh no, not another one of your crazy, expensive plans.
(Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 15 marks for the quality of
your writing.)
Me: Mum, Dad, I know you may be skeptical at first, but please hear me out. I've just come across this incredible opportunity called 'Bike the Nile' and I believe it's something that I really want to be a part of.
Dad: Another expensive plan? What is it all about?
Me: Well, 'Bike the Nile' is a fundraising initiative by a charity where participants like me would embark on a cycling expedition along the Nile River. It's not just an ordinary trip; it's a chance to explore amazing landscapes, experience local cultures, and contribute to a noble cause. The money we raise through this adventure helps support the charity's other important work.
Mum: That sounds interesting, but is it safe? We need to ensure your well-being.
Me: Absolutely, safety is of utmost priority. The trip is organized by a reputable adventure travel company with trained guides and support staff. They have extensive experience in organizing such expeditions, ensuring all necessary safety precautions are taken. Plus, we would be traveling in a group, which adds an extra layer of security.
Dad: And what about the cost? We need to consider our budget too.
Me: I completely understand your concerns, Dad. The cost to participate is £1000, but it includes all the necessary arrangements like accommodation, transportation, meals, and a support team. I promise you, I am willing to contribute towards the payment from my savings and also seek additional funding.
Mum: Additional funding? How do you plan to do that?
Me: I've been doing some research and there are numerous fundraising ideas that we can explore together. We can organize a small charity event, like a bake sale or a garage sale, with the help of our friends and family. I could also reach out to local businesses for sponsorship. By involving the community, we can raise a significant amount towards the payment.
Dad: It sounds like a lot of effort, but if it's for a good cause and with proper planning, I suppose it could be worth it.
Me: Thank you, Dad. I truly believe this trip would be an amazing opportunity for personal growth and a chance to make a difference. The experience of cycling along the Nile, meeting new people, and contributing to a charity's work is an opportunity I don't want to miss. I promise to be responsible and dedicated throughout the fundraising process.
Mum: Well, if you're passionate about it and willing to put in the effort, then we can support you. Let's make a plan and start taking the necessary steps.
Me: Thank you both so much! I am incredibly grateful for your support. I will start working on the fundraising ideas right away and keep you updated on my progress.
(In this conversation, I have highlighted the adventure aspect of 'Bike the Nile' while addressing concerns about safety and cost. I have also offered to actively contribute towards the payment and outlined potential fundraising strategies to alleviate the financial burden on my parents. By demonstrating my commitment and passion, I hope to persuade them that this trip is both safe and worthwhile.)