Review these first two paragraphs of an essay for me.

In our world, there are many things that can be accepted as good or bad. When unfair or bad laws are made, a specific person or people want to enforce it because it benefits themselves, not others. Sometimes, a law can be deleted or altered when the majority of the people don’t like it or the problem doesn't matter anymore. If you want a rule/law to be gone and away, you need to have a good reason. In the following paragraphs, I will explain this information in detail.
First, t h e  r e a s o n   w h y  b a d laws are made is because it benefits a specific group of people. Only when someone comes and makes everyone notice that it is unfair, it will stop. Slavery in the United States wasn’t completely outlawed until 1865. This was when the 13th amendment was passed by the government, not people who owned slaves. This is because it is good for themselves.

When you fix ALL the things in para 1 as I told you yesterday, I’ll consider the rest.