I'm writing a story about a girl who loves a boy that barely notices her and her best friend is trying to set them up even though he is in love with her as well. I don't know if i should make the girl fall in love with her crush or her best friend....it's very frustrating... If i choose the crush it would make her seem like a bad person even though all the best friend wants for her is to be happy. If I choose the best friend it would leave too much suspense as to what the crush would have said...PLEASE HELP!

Suppose the boy ends up with a third girl? The two best friends could then find that their friendship is more important than any boy.

Flip a coin, and make it work. The magic of the writing will take over. I like it when the guy falls for the girls mutual enemy, or one of their sisters.

Oh. That's good, thank you!

I can see why that'd be so hard to write, because either way wouldn't be the best ending. Maybe she could choose the crush, but she would accidentally find out from some gossipy girl that it was the friend who set them up, the friend who really loves her. That way you could find out what the crush would say, but she could end up with the best friend. Or you could take an alternative route, and throw a third boy into the mix, so she wonn't have to choose either. Keep in mind though, that it might get confusing with so many people. If you do bring in a third boy, make sure you characterize him well, so it won't seem like he was just thrown in there so she wouldn't have to make the decision. Go back into your story and add the third boy, if you want him to be a part of it, so it doesn't seem like you just thought of him toward the end. Or, you could add a twist, and maybe the crush could admit he really likes the girl's best female friend, not the girl, so the girl would get the best friend, and the best female friend would get the crush. It may take awhile, but try writing out a few alternative endings, and showing them to your friends, or family members and asking them which they find is more interesting. Good luck, and let us know what you decide!

She should fall in live with her best friend if he's a guy

Choosing between the girl falling in love with her crush or her best friend can indeed be a difficult decision. To help you make this choice, let's consider a few things:

1. Character Development: Think about the character arcs and growth for both the girl and the best friend. Which option allows for more personal growth and challenges for each character? Consider how their actions and decisions will shape their journey throughout the story.

2. Conflict and Tension: Consider how each option adds dramatic tension to the story. Which option creates more conflict, internal or external? Conflict can drive the narrative and keep readers engaged.

3. Reader Expectations: Consider your target audience and the genre of your story. What do readers typically expect in this type of story? How can you meet or subvert those expectations to keep the narrative engaging?

Once you've thought about these aspects, here's a step-by-step approach to deciding the direction of your story:

1. Reflect on the themes and main message of your story. Think about which choice aligns better with these themes and message.

2. Consider the backstory and history between the girl, her crush, and her best friend. Evaluate the dynamics of their relationships and how these dynamics would influence the direction of the story.

3. Think about the emotional impact on your readers. Which option would provoke stronger emotions or create deeper connections with the characters?

4. Outline both potential storylines. Write down the key events, conflicts, and resolutions for each option. Compare them, paying attention to their pacing, character development, and overall impact on the narrative.

5. Put yourself in the readers' shoes. Imagine reading the story from their perspective and consider which option would make for a more satisfying and fulfilling reading experience.

Remember, there is no right or wrong answer – it ultimately comes down to what you, as the writer, feel best suits your story and characters. Trust your instincts and choose the option that resonates most with you. Good luck with your writing!