Does this sound natural and can anyone please help edit it??
“ la semaine dernière, ma famille et moi sommes allés nager. Nous avons beaucoup apprécié. je n'ai pas nagé depuis six ans. nous avons eu des problèmes dans la partie sept pieds alors nous sommes allés à la partie quatre pieds. nous nous sommes tellement amusés, nous y avons passé des heures. après cela, nous sommes allés chercher de la glace. j'ai du chocolat pendant que ma famille a de la vanille. J'y retournerais sans hésiter.”

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