Question

"With 16 girls in the cIass, the amount of boys is outrageous!' ProcIaimed Danies. 'True, but this is a large class danies." Where are the mistakes?

Answer 1

The exclamation point is correct, but there are 3 errors between that exclamation point and True. There are two more errors between class and the end.

https://learn.lexiconic.net/dialoguepunctuation.htm

Let me know how you fix it, and I'll check it again.