I have to write a process analysis essay that shows other students how I manage my time when taking online courses, maintaining a job, and focusing on family.
Can someone please help me come up with a thesis statement for my introduction? I am having a writer's block!
How does this sound?
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to optimize functioning to the highest degree on a daily basis.
How can you revise that sentence so there aren't so many "big words" that can be simplified, yet get the same idea across?
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to fulfill daily functioning.
What do you think? :)
Better.
What can you do to replace "functioning"?
https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/function?s=t
Operation?
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to fulfill daily operation.
Objectives?
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to fulfill daily objectives.
I'm leaning towards objectives.
Or maybe ...
Maintaining balance among each day's tasks and activities is extremely important in order to live each day efficiently.
Or ...
Maintaining balance among each day's tasks and activities is necessary for living efficiently.
I like the second one, hope you do not mind me using that in my essay!
Thank you so much!