Can you help me make this sentence more detail?
Ralph put on warm clothing before he went out into the storm.
Ralph put on his blue down jacket, ski hat, and insulated boots before he went out in the snow storm.
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Certainly! To make the sentence more detailed, we can add specific information. A good way to do this is by incorporating descriptive words and expanding on the actions and circumstances.
"Ralph, feeling the chill in the air and seeing the dark clouds gathering overhead, conscientiously adorned himself in thick layers of insulated clothing, fully aware that braving the impending tempest would require utmost protection."
In this revised sentence, we emphasized the weather conditions, Ralph's awareness, and his careful choice of warm clothing.