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please help me write a paragraph for an editorial response to the following Washington Post article with a clear thesis.(will put the link in comments)

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  1. will not let me post link so the article is

    the Washington post

    Many Afghans Lost to Hazards Of Childbirth
    by
    pamela constable

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    posted by suzanna
  2. What do you want to say?

  3. @ms.sue i kinda know the direction i want to go for my thesis but idk if it is very good...
    "Hospitals need to be built in more desolate areas of afghanistan to help decrease the risk of fatality for mothers and unborn infants."

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    posted by suzanna
  4. Who's going to pay for these hospitals?

  5. good point!and i wrote my paragraph can you give me your opinion on it?@ms.sue

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    posted by suzanna
  6. The healthcare system in Afghanistan needs to appease mother's and an unborn child's chances of survival during birth. Mothers' lives are less significant than the child's according to many people of Afghanistan. Pregnancy is highly supported within their religion as a child is "the fruit of heaven".The country boisterously promotes the idea of having a child every year, which leads to ample miscarriages and deaths of both mother and babies. The country needs new hospitals and healthcare workers in more desolate areas. The leaders should seek out help from foreign countries to diligently fund the new medical help.

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