Can someone tell me if this make sense
1.list.some important ideas that Johnny Tremain includes. Why did you choose those ideas
My answer : I think one of the most ideal he discussed was that children are, forced to leave their childhood and become men. Even nowadays this still happens, people force their children to grow up .
I know the Camas and ect.. Are not right I know I will fix them
Are you sure you want to write that? With every species on earth, including humans, the young must grow up and become adults. Are you really intending to say people should stay children forever? Or what?
Writeacher: Thank you for judging that for me. I shall write it more clearly. Again thank you 🙏🏼
You're welcome.
Be sure you are clear on what "ideal" means. The words "idea" and "ideal" are not necessarily interchangeable. The question asks for "important ideas," not ideals.
To determine if a statement or idea makes sense, it's important to analyze the context and clarity of the statement. In the case of your answer, it seems like you are discussing a specific idea from the book "Johnny Tremain" and explaining why you think it is important.
To provide a more accurate assessment of whether your answer makes sense or not, it would be helpful to have more context about the book and the specific idea you are referring to. However, from what I can gather, it appears that you are discussing the idea that children are often forced to mature and take on adult responsibilities at a young age. This is a valid idea that can be seen in literature and real-life situations.
If you want to improve your answer, consider providing specific examples from the book that support this idea. Additionally, clarify your statements to ensure they are grammatically correct, properly punctuated, and coherent.