Language arts

Read the following statement.

We learn more from our failures than from our successes.

Write a persuasive paragraph in which you agree or disagree with the statement. State your opinion and support it with reasoning. Use language that will appeal to your readers' reason and emotions.

I completely agree with it but I have no idea how to put it in a four sentenced paragraph.

Here is what I have so far. Is it good enough?

I definitely agree with the statement. Learning from your mistakes is a good example of how you can plan things out for the future. If you learn from your mistakes you have a lower chance of doing it again. If you make a mistake you can't get mad at yourself for it, Nobody is perfect. You learn more from your mistakes than you do success. Failure makes success.

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  1. You are repeating the same idea, over and over.

    Omit the first sentence. Keep the second sentence. Then give a specific example, from your own life if you can. The specific example should take at least two sentences. Revise the third sentence so it can serve as a conclusion. Omit the rest.

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  2. Okay thank you.

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  3. thanks write teacher, everyone use your own answer and ideas along with experiences to help support your claim

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  4. Jesus all of you students can be so r3t@rd3d sometimes.

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  5. ummm thats not the real Write teacher >.>

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  6. I cant believe only you and me noticed that xD the real ones have a person ma bob at the beginning of their names!

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