Read the following statement.
We learn more from our failures than from our successes.
Write a persuasive paragraph in which you agree or disagree with the statement. State your opinion and support it with reasoning. Use language that will appeal to your readers' reason and emotions.
I completely agree with it but I have no idea how to put it in a four sentenced paragraph.
Here is what I have so far. Is it good enough?
I definitely agree with the statement. Learning from your mistakes is a good example of how you can plan things out for the future. If you learn from your mistakes you have a lower chance of doing it again. If you make a mistake you can't get mad at yourself for it, Nobody is perfect. You learn more from your mistakes than you do success. Failure makes success.
ummm thats not the real Write teacher >.>
thanks write teacher, everyone use your own answer and ideas along with experiences to help support your claim
I cant believe only you and me noticed that xD the real ones have a person ma bob at the beginning of their names!
Your paragraph is a good start, but it can be further developed and refined to strengthen your argument. Here's an improved version:
I wholeheartedly agree with the notion that we learn more from our failures than from our successes. It is through our failures that we gain valuable insights and grow as individuals. When we make mistakes, we are compelled to critically evaluate our actions and seek ways to improve. Failure provides us with lessons that success alone cannot offer. Moreover, failure humbles us and teaches us resilience, perseverance, and determination. It is through these experiences of falling down and getting back up that we cultivate the skills necessary for future success. Our failures serve as guiding beacons, illuminating the path towards self-improvement and achievement. Therefore, rather than dwelling on our failures, we should embrace them as opportunities for growth and use them as stepping stones towards a brighter future.
You are repeating the same idea, over and over.
Omit the first sentence. Keep the second sentence. Then give a specific example, from your own life if you can. The specific example should take at least two sentences. Revise the third sentence so it can serve as a conclusion. Omit the rest.