This is a letter im trying to do for different businesses to donate items. If you would please make correction and even make it more progessional. Thanks

On behalf of the Boyd Community and Recreation Association a non-profit organization. We are
requesting your support in making this a successful and rememberable event. This is an Annual County-
wide Veteran’s Day Appreciation, which mainly focus on our men’s and women’s who have served or
currently serving to protect our country. This event will be on November 10, 2018 at the Boyd
Community Park. We are asking for monetary or in-kind donations. All proceeds will go towards this
event and is tax-deductible.

I meant make it more professional.

Please study and work on your English skills, including capitalization, punctuation, grammar, word choice, etc.

I'll redo the first part of this. Then you try the rest.

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On behalf of the Boyd Community and Recreation Association, a non-profit organization, I am requesting your support in making the Annual County-wide Veterans Day Appreciation a successful and memorable event. We will mainly focus on our men and women who have served or are
currently serving to protect our country.

This event will take place on November 10, 2018 at the Boyd

Community Park. We are asking for you to make a donation towards this event. All donations are tax-deductible. Thanks in advance.

Much better, but still a few things:

https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/
Scroll down and read about commas in dates.

Remove the word "for" in front of "you" -- it's unnecessary here.

Replace "towards" with a more accurate word. What do you think?

On behalf of the Boyd Community and Recreation Association, a non-profit organization, we are requesting your support in making the Annual County-wide Veterans Day Appreciation a successful and memorable event. We will mainly focus on our men and women who have served or are currently serving to protect our country.

This event will take place on November 10, 2018 at the Boyd
Community Park. We are asking you to donate to this event. All donations are tax-deductible. Thanks in advance.

[Your Name]

[Your Title]
[Your Organization]
[Your Address]
[City, State, ZIP Code]
[Email Address]
[Phone Number]
[Date]

[Business Name]
[Business Address]
[City, State, ZIP Code]

Subject: Donation Request for Annual County-wide Veteran's Day Appreciation Event

Dear [Business Name],

I hope this letter finds you well. On behalf of the Boyd Community and Recreation Association, a non-profit organization dedicated to promoting community engagement and support, I am writing to request your generous support for our upcoming Annual County-wide Veteran's Day Appreciation Event.

The event, scheduled to take place on November 10, 2018, at the Boyd Community Park, aims to honor and express our gratitude to the brave men and women who have sacrificially served or are currently serving in the armed forces to protect our country. By providing a platform for our community to come together and commemorate their bravery, we aim to create a memorable and meaningful experience for not only our veterans but also the entire Boyd community.

In order to make this event a resounding success, we are humbly seeking monetary or in-kind donations from local businesses such as yours. Any contribution, whether financial or in the form of goods or services, will go directly towards supporting the event expenses and ensuring a memorable experience for all attendees.

As a non-profit organization, any donation made to the Boyd Community and Recreation Association is tax-deductible. Moreover, we will ensure to acknowledge your generosity by prominently displaying your business name and logo during the event and on event promotional materials.

If you are interested in supporting this worthy cause, we kindly request that you complete the attached donation form or provide any additional information regarding the type of donation you would like to contribute. If you have any questions or require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me directly at [Your Phone Number] or [Your Email Address].

Thank you so much for considering our request and for your commitment to honoring our veterans. With your support, we can make a significant difference in demonstrating our gratitude and respect for their service.

We look forward to the positive impact your contribution will make on this memorable event.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]
[Your Title]
[Boyd Community and Recreation Association]