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I need help with rewriting a theme essay. The structure for the theme essay is intro paragraph (thesis statement with topic) and three examples (body paragraphs) and a conclusion paragraph.

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  1. Do you have specific questions?

    Please post your finished and proofread essay here and someone will probably critique it for you.

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  2. Before you rewrite your essay, please read and follow the ideas here:
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/editing.htm

    In addition, once you think it's perfect, have someone read it OUT LOUD to you. You'll undoubtedly hear -- and therefore find and fix -- any errors still there. My recommendation is that you do the reading out loud at least once more -- and make further corrections.

    As Ms. Sue wrote, you may post your finished essay if you'd like someone here to critique it for you.

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