I also wrote this poem and this is deticated to my life. Does it sound good?

I wish

I wish I could touch the stars
And try to reach the sky
I wish I could go back
Back to the good times
I wish I could see my grandpa
Who is in God's hands
I wish I could see him smile
So he can smile back
I wish I could be 5
Instead of growing old
I wish time would move slow
So I can have fun some more
I wish I could be famous
And support all my fans
I wish the world was at peace
So we can all join hands
I wish I could see my future
And what will I be
I wish I could see what you see
And my greatest wish of all is to be free.

I personally think that it is very nice.

Aw... Thank you so, so much I have more poems than that would you like to read them??

No thank you, I have to get my math done, but thanks for asking!

No probs you need help with math I'm good at math.

My problem is the subject under this one. thank you!

I agree; good poem.