can you help me with passive voice misuse, and punctuation in compound and complex sentences. I was using a grammar checker website and it told me what was wrong.

Mathematics resolves abstract problem situations of daily life, strengthens the mental calculation, having as the base a logical order that contributes to the study of numbers, figures and symbols and studies the quantitative relationships of the context. Therefore, using mathematics in a way in which students have fun while learning, a concept of recreational mathematics is projected in the students, which allows interacting with games. Every problem that has been detected and solved will give students new knowledge that will lead into a new experience in learning math. Hence, that games ought to be given based on their weaknesses, to which it is intended to provide a solution. The games will be based on the four basic operations: Addition, Subtraction, Multiplication and Division. Since the games are considered from a vision of the world of numbers, present characteristics.
We have interviewed the teacher in mathematics, Adelis Nieves, which has been motivated to study the career of mathematical sciences because it is such a complex area but that leads to the truth, she studied this because she loved to give an accurate answer to the complexity of the world. The interviewee has a higher level of education than the master's degree, she also has mastery in earthquake simulations through mathematical calculations, she has no family background. Adelis went to the Central University of Venezuela and gained a science career that led her to complete her master's degree. She is a teacher of mathematics and a crew member in the area of earthquakes, she expresses to the students that mathematics is a universe full of numerous difficult and frustrating stretches. Although it is complex but satisfactory at the moment that you come up with the result, that is an accurate, truth, so do not be discouraged and you have to make them want. And that does not permanently remove her from going to the mountains, to be working on her projects, to run which are her favorite pastimes.

Although in this incipient study, initial aspects of an investigation are shown, it is already beginning to discover interesting aspects and frameworks to continue deepening. From now on, the reflection logs begin to show their effectiveness to allow to analyze the understandings of the students about motivational and emotional aspects that motivation is a crucial element in student performance. If a subject is with an exceptional portion of motivation, their resilience is strengthened. Therefore, gives a kind of coating to withstand different emotional and effective attacks. The investigative construction in this process demands challenges to achieve in the sense of starting to take the dialogues of the logs to a scenario where the mathematical knowledge becomes the protagonists of the dialogues, to deepen precisely the motivational aspects involved.
From the educative approach barberá (2002) indicates - on the motivation - that the educational psychology relieves the importance of the motivational processes in the action between motivation, academic performance, and achievement. Along with reviewing the complexities of the action, in student development; motivation has a preponderant role in academic performance, that is, in measuring the knowledge imparted in the classroom. From this point of view, the process of measuring academic performance as such will not be questioned. Rather, it is attempted to confirm the importance of motivation in students' learning processes. In relation to academic performance, is motivation who is particularly important as a link in the development of the academic experience of the student. Besides being an element that is always present in a preponderant manner when making judgments a priori and without further mediation of more complex processes or techniques of study about of the mathematical abilities of the study subjects.
What I think about what we did, it's just frustration. I do not seem to have learned what was expected and that does not benefit me. Since it gives me less confidence when doing the exercises, no matter how hard I try, it does not seem to be enough. There should be some memory recipe with respect to mathematics, it's not that I do not like them, it's just that it's too tough for me to do the exercises and that frustrates me and makes me feel silly and I do not like that feeling ."log 2:" I always understand the mechanics, but the how to reason it costs me heaps, that's why I proposed that there was a recipe. Not only typical, that if you do an abundance of exercises you will understand, but in reality, I continue to apply it mechanically, it is rather a recipe that allows me to develop a mathematical reasoning ability.

Who is your audience?

Well this is for a scholarship and they ask us to interview someone who has a career in math

I don't see any evidence of an interview. Who did you interview? What is his/her career? Why did he/she choose this career?

look at the second paragraph and two they wanted us to write the interview in essay format

Let's work with this paragraph, then.

We have interviewed the teacher in mathematics, Adelis Nieves, WHO has STUDIED mathematicS. IT is a complex area but IT leads to the truth.
She studied this because she lovES to give an accurate answer to the complexity of the world. The interviewee has a higher level of education than the master's degree, AND also has mastery in earthquake simulations through mathematical calculations. Adelis went to the Central University of Venezuela and gained a science career that led her to complete her master's degree. She is a teacher of mathematics and a crew member in the area of earthquakes, she expresses to the students that mathematics is a universe full of numerous difficult and frustrating stretches.


I deleted the sentence about no family background. Of course she had/has family -- she was born with a mother and father.

Is English your second language?

You're trying to make this much to complex. Keep it simple.

Im from the USA

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Passive Voice Misuse:

The misuse of passive voice occurs when the subject receives the action of the verb instead of performing the action. It can make sentences sound unclear or awkward. To correct passive voice misuse, you need to rephrase the sentence to make the subject the one performing the action.

Punctuation in Compound and Complex Sentences:

Compound Sentences:
Compound sentences are made up of two independent clauses joined together by coordinating conjunctions (such as "and," "but," or "so") or a semicolon. Each independent clause can stand alone as a complete sentence. To punctuate compound sentences, you can use a comma and a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon.

Complex Sentences:
Complex sentences contain one independent clause and at least one dependent clause. The dependent clause cannot stand alone as a complete sentence. To punctuate complex sentences, you do not necessarily need to use any special punctuation. However, if the dependent clause comes before the independent clause, you can use a comma to separate them.

Now let's look at your paragraphs and identify any passive voice misuse or punctuation errors:

Paragraph 1:

"Mathematics resolves abstract problem situations of daily life, strengthens mental calculation, and has as its base a logical order that contributes to the study of numbers, figures, and symbols. It studies the quantitative relationships of the context. Therefore, by using mathematics in a way that students have fun while learning, a concept of recreational mathematics is projected onto the students, which allows them to interact with games. Every problem that is detected and solved will give students new knowledge that will lead to a new experience in learning math. Hence, games ought to be given based on students' weaknesses, in order to provide a solution. The games will be based on the four basic operations: addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division. Since the games are considered from a vision of the world of numbers, they present characteristics."

In this paragraph, there are no instances of passive voice misuse. However, I have made a few punctuation corrections to improve clarity.

Paragraph 2:

"We have interviewed Adelis Nieves, a mathematics teacher who was motivated to study the career of mathematical sciences because it is such a complex area but also leads to the truth. She studied this because she loved to give an accurate answer to the complexity of the world. The interviewee has a higher level of education than a master's degree and also has mastery in earthquake simulations through mathematical calculations. She has no family background in this field. Adelis went to the Central University of Venezuela and pursued a science career that led her to complete her master's degree. She is a teacher of mathematics and a crew member in the area of earthquakes. She expresses to the students that mathematics is a universe full of numerous difficult and frustrating stretches. Although it is complex, it is also satisfying when you come up with the result, which is accurate and true. So, do not be discouraged and make them want to learn. And that does not permanently prevent her from going to the mountains, working on her projects, and running, which are her favorite pastimes."

In this paragraph, there are also no instances of passive voice misuse. However, I have made a few punctuation corrections to improve the flow and clarity of the sentences.

Paragraph 3:

"Although this study is in its early stages, it is already beginning to discover interesting aspects and frameworks to continue deepening. From now on, the reflection logs begin to show their effectiveness in analyzing the students' understandings of motivational and emotional aspects. Motivation is a crucial element in student performance. If a subject is motivated, their resilience is strengthened, giving them the ability to withstand different emotional and effective attacks. The investigative construction in this process demands challenges to be achieved, in the sense of starting to take the logs' dialogues to a scenario where mathematical knowledge becomes the protagonist, deepening precisely into the motivational aspects involved.

According to Barberá (2002) in his educational approach, "motivation" is considered important in the action between motivation, academic performance, and achievement. Along with reviewing the complexities of the action, student development and motivation play a preponderant role in academic performance, measuring the knowledge imparted in the classroom. From this point of view, the process of measuring academic performance will not be questioned, but the importance of motivation in students' learning processes will be confirmed. In relation to academic performance, motivation is particularly important as a link in the development of the students' academic experience. It is present in a preponderant manner when making judgments about the mathematical abilities of the study subjects, without further mediation of more complex processes or study techniques.

"What I think about what we did is just frustration. I do not seem to have learned what was expected, and that does not benefit me. It gives me less confidence when doing exercises, no matter how hard I try, it does not seem to be enough. There should be some memory recipe with respect to mathematics. It's not that I do not like them, it's just that they're too tough for me to do, and that frustrates me and makes me feel silly, and I do not like that feeling. "Log 2:" I always understand the mechanics, but understanding the reasoning behind it costs me a lot. That's why I proposed that there was a recipe. Not just the typical one, where you do an abundance of exercises to understand, but a recipe that allows me to develop mathematical reasoning abilities."

In this paragraph, there are no instances of passive voice misuse. However, I have made a few punctuation corrections to enhance clarity and flow.

I hope these explanations and corrections help you understand and improve your writing!