Hi i am writing a response paper for "Cathedral" by Raymond Carver. Im not sure but is this a proper thesis statement.

In the short story Cathedral, by Raymond Carver, a man refers to Robert as "this blind man." Not only is he categorizing Robert, but he's also making wrongful assumptions about people who have disabilities. Instead of assuming, he should sympathize and try to think about the positives. Being blind is just one specific aspect of Roberts’s life and it doesn't define who he is as a person.

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Your thesis statement is a good start, but it could be made more focused and powerful. Remember that a thesis statement is meant to present the main argument or point of your paper. Here's a revised version of your thesis statement:

In Raymond Carver's short story "Cathedral," the protagonist's initial categorization and wrongful assumptions about the blind man Robert emphasize the importance of looking beyond surface-level appearances and exploring the complexities of individual identity.

In this revised thesis statement, we have clarified the central argument by emphasizing the significance of looking beyond appearances and understanding the complexities of individual identity. This will serve as a stronger foundation for your response paper. Remember to support and develop this thesis further with evidence and analysis in the body of your paper.