This is my next paragraph after the intro and consists of the summary.

1) Is the last line of my paragraph necessary? Does it belong somewhere else My next few paragraphs will about the content of the poem and what different phrases mean. Is that a good transistion to end it.

2)I included some quotes in there. I still have to include the line # and pg number for all of them. I included it for one quote below? Did I do it right? Does the reference of the quote go right after the quotation or right after the sentence?

The speaker of this sonnet is angry that the modern world has lost its connection to nature and humans are taking everything for granted. We are too busy with maintaining the industries and technology, which is causing us to prevent seeing what really matters. He says that the “sea bares her bosom to the moon, \ winds that will be howling at all hours, \” and still humanity is out of tune (l.5-6, 318). Nothing in the nature makes us smile or love it anymore like it used to in the beginning of our generation. He hates the fact that we are losing touch with the spiritual connection god has given us as a gift. The speakers wishes that he would rather be a “Pagan suckled in a creed outwork; \ So might I, standing on this pleasant lea, \” in order to see gods like Proteus rising from the water, a sight that would make him happy. Basically, this sonnet is a conflict between nature and humanity.

When i'm using a quote, say that i don't use the whole line, but just a small phrase of the line. Do I still need to include the line number too?

When quoting from poems, all you need is the line number(s), not the page number.

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Delete "with" in the second sentence.

Rephrase: "causing us to prevent seeing..."

Why is there a slash mark just before the ending quotation mark for the line 6 quotation?

Rephrase: "Nothing in the nature..." (the nature??)

What is "it"?

Change "like" to "as" - it's followed by a clause, not a phrase.

Again, why is there a slash mark just before the ending quotation mark of the uncredited quotation?

Is the sonnet a conflict? Or is it describing the conflict?

1) It is not necessary to include the last line of your paragraph as it seems like a separate question or thought. If you believe it is relevant, you can place it in a separate paragraph. As for transitioning, it might be better to rephrase it as "In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the content of the poem and analyze the meaning behind different phrases." This provides a clearer transition to the next topic.

2) Including quotes is a great way to support your analysis. To correctly cite a quote, you need to provide the line number and page number (if applicable) for all quotes. The reference should be placed after the quotation, within parentheses. In your example, the reference for the quote would be as follows: (l.5-6, 318). This indicates that the quoted lines are from lines 5-6, and the source of the quote is on page 318.