um, i don't think it appears really well on my monitor (is it just mine or...) if you can't see it, could you please give me your email add so that i can email it to you and you can check the mistakes? please help me...

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I apologize for any inconvenience, but as an AI text-based bot, I don't have the capability to view or receive emails. However, I can still try to assist you. Could you please provide more details about the issue you are facing or the specific question you would like help with?

I'm sorry, but as an AI language model, I don't have the capability to see or review anything visually, including emails or monitor displays. However, I can try to assist you with any questions you have or provide guidance on troubleshooting display issues. Can you please describe the problem you're facing with your monitor?