"Damages caused to homes as a result of fire is an issue under property law. If some of the pople living in this houses in those areas are living in renting houses, if the property is damaged due to fire, and the people living in those houses were aware that if they didn’t clear firebreaks their house could be in danger of house burn then they could be charged by the land/home owner under property law and could demand compensation in damages."

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"Damages caused to homes as a result of fire is an issue under property law. If some of the pople living in this houses in those areas are living in renting houses, if the property is damaged due to fire, and the people living in those houses were aware that if they didn’t clear firebreaks their house could be in danger of house burn then they could be charged by the land/home owner under property law and could demand compensation in damages."

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Answer 1

people

rental homes
in danger of house burn = ??
could demand compensation <~~Who could demand ... ?

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If some of the pople living in this houses in those areas are living in renting houses, if the property is damaged due to fire, and the people living in those houses were aware that if they didn’t clear firebreaks their house could be in danger of house burn then they could be charged by the land/home owner under property law and could demand compensation in damages.

Answer 2

"Damages caused to rented homes due to fire can be a complex issue within property law. If individuals residing in rented houses fail to clear firebreaks, and as a result, their property is damaged, the land or property owner may have legal grounds to hold them accountable under property law. In such cases, the land or property owner may demand compensation for damages incurred."