I worte a letter to my friend explannig the weather conditions in my community can u read and yell me if it sound good?
Dear kahieem ,
How r u doing ? I would like to explain about the weather conditions in my community .The weather in my community is very hot but also warm in the nights .my community has a very wonderful weather condition , in the day times it is as hot as fire , but in the nightit is as cold as ice
Does your teacher expect you to use standard English? What about capitalizing the beginnings of sentences and your friend's name? What about correct spelling?
You also contradicted yourself about the temperature at night.
Sure, I can help you review your letter. Based on the text you provided, here are a few suggestions for improvement:
Dear Kahieem,
How are you doing? I would like to tell you about the weather conditions in my community. The weather in my community is hot during the day, but it cools down in the evenings. Overall, we have a delightful climate. During the daytime, the temperature can be scorching, feeling as hot as fire. However, once the sun sets, it becomes chilly, as if it were as cold as ice.
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