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Other Information About Mrs. walker.
We all have been taught that the hot comb (straighten or pressing comb) was invinvented by Madam CJ Walker the self-made millionaire. Truth be told, the comb was actually used by a French woman and 1845, who was trying to copy the styles worn in the ancient Egyptian. The comb was actually sold in Sears and Bloomingdales to the American public in 1800s. It is not a known inventor of the comb but there are facts that Mrs. Walker did not invent the hot comb. She only redesignd the comb by giving it wide spaced teeth so that it could better accommodate thicker hair and various textures.
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Mrs. Walker: More Facts About the Hot Comb
In this section, we'll explore additional information about Mrs. Walker and her association with the hot comb.
Most of us have heard that Madam CJ Walker, the self-made millionaire, invented the hot comb. However, it's important to know the real story behind this misconception. In truth, the hot comb was not invented by Mrs. Walker, but rather by a French woman in 1845. This French woman was actually inspired by the ancient Egyptian hairstyles and wanted to replicate them. To do so, she created the hot comb.
Interestingly, the hot comb made its way to the American public in the 1800s, when it was sold in popular stores like Sears and Bloomingdale's. While the exact inventor of the hot comb remains unknown, it is clear that Mrs. Walker played a significant role in its evolution.
Instead of inventing the hot comb, Mrs. Walker redesigned it. She recognized the need for wide-spaced teeth to better accommodate thicker hair and various textures. By giving the comb these modifications, she made it more suitable for a wider range of hair types.
So, while Mrs. Walker was not the original inventor of the hot comb, she certainly contributed to its development and made important improvements that catered to the needs of different hair textures.