I'm writing an essay about the positive effects of homeschooling, but I'm having trouble writing my introduction.
Can anyone help me with writing a good, eye catching first sentence?
Thanks!!!!
Wouldn't those sentences be more suitable for a persuasive essay?
Isn't your essay a type of persuasive essay since you've only written about the positive side of homeschooling?
But as I said, I don't know what your essay says.
I can't introduce something I don't know.
My essay is supposed to be stating a generalization (opinion based on fact) and then supporting it with evidence. So my generalization is: Homeschooling has many positive effects on students.
Why don't you start with an anecdote about a positive effect on one student?
Could you give me an example? I was thinking about incorporating an anecdote but I didn't know how i could fit it in
Joe used to be in trouble all of the time. He mouthed off to teachers and got into fights on the playground. Homeschooling has relieved some of his stress and he feels much better about himself now.
oooh okay Thank you!!!
You're welcome.
Of course! Writing a captivating introduction for your essay is crucial to grab your reader's attention right from the start. To come up with an eye-catching first sentence, you can try the following approach:
1. Start with a thought-provoking question: Begin your introduction by asking your readers a question that aligns with your essay topic. For instance, "Have you ever considered the impact of homeschooling on children's overall well-being and academic success?"
2. Present a surprising statistic or fact: Begin with a surprising or intriguing statistic related to homeschooling. For example, "Did you know that the number of homeschooled students in the United States has doubled in the past decade, reaching over two million?"
3. Use an anecdote or personal story: Begin with a brief, engaging story or anecdote that relates to homeschooling. This personal touch will help create a connection with your readers, such as "Imagine a child being able to study marine biology by exploring tide pools during an impromptu family trip!"
4. Start with a bold statement or a powerful quote: Consider beginning with a strong statement or a compelling quote that captures the essence of your essay. For instance, "Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire," as the Irish poet William Butler Yeats once said, and it is within the realm of homeschooling that this fire can truly ignite."
Remember, the first sentence should be attention-grabbing and set the tone for the rest of your essay. Once you hook your readers with a compelling introduction, they will be more likely to continue reading with interest. Good luck with your essay!
Want to sleep until noon?
Tired of being bullied?
You have a much better idea than I do because I don't know what you've said in your essay.