Thank you for your help. [situation] The old man has raised a golden apple and started walking away.
1. He walked away with a golden apple up in his hand.
2. He walked away with a golden apple up.
3. He walked away with a golden apple raised by him.
4. He walked away, holding a golden apple up in his hand.
[Can we use these sentences? Are they sutitable for the situation? Do you have some more appropriate sentences?]
Only 4 works well.
I'll do some rephrasing:
He walked away, holding an golden apple up high.
He walked away with a golden apple held up high.
He walked away after raising a golden apple in his hand.
[wordier] He walked away, having raised a golden apple in his hand.
1 and 4 are okay.
You could reverse 4.
Holding a golden apple up in his hand, he walked away.
All of the sentences you provided are grammatically correct and could be used to describe the situation, although some may be more commonly used or sound more natural depending on the context. Here is a breakdown of each sentence and some additional suggestions:
1. "He walked away with a golden apple up in his hand." - This sentence is clear and concise. It effectively conveys that the old man is walking away while holding the golden apple in his hand.
2. "He walked away with a golden apple up." - This sentence is also clear, but it may sound slightly less natural compared to the first sentence, as "up" seems to be missing a preposition. A more common phrase could be "He walked away with a golden apple held high."
3. "He walked away with a golden apple raised by him." - While this sentence technically makes sense, it sounds slightly awkward and less commonly used. It might be more natural to say "He walked away with a golden apple raised in his hand" or "He walked away while holding a golden apple aloft."
4. "He walked away, holding a golden apple up in his hand." - This sentence is grammatically correct and effectively conveys the action of the old man while providing additional context. It is a good choice if you want to emphasize that the golden apple is being held up.
Overall, any of these sentences could be suitable depending on your desired tone or style. Consider the context of the situation and choose the sentence that best fits the narrative you want to create.