HELP-REWORD!!! OF DOES IT SOUND CLEAR?
Although I am not part of the LGBTQ community, as an outsider, I personally know someone that this bill would relate to. People not in the LGTQQ community may not understand the political forces that impact people in the LGTQQ community and therefore may not fight for them because it does not directly impact/affect them. Therefore, I would like to propose a bill that would have an impact/effect on the LGTQQ community. A bill that will fully recognize, include, respect, and protect the (the right to vote, to free speech, to fair and equal treatment, etc.,) of all LGTQQ community.
Although it is perfectly clear, the last phrase beginning "A bill..." is not a sentence. Perhaps say " My bill will fully recognize, include .... " .
It sounds good and clear but the last sentence that starts with "Therefore" i would change it to say: I would like to propose a bill that would have an impact/effect on the LGTQQ community.
Here is a restated version of your text:
While I am not personally a part of the LGBTQ community, I have a close acquaintance who would be affected by this bill. It's important to acknowledge that individuals who are not part of the LGBTQ community might not fully comprehend the political challenges and discrimination faced by LGBTQ individuals, which may lead them to disregard fighting for their rights. With that in mind, I propose a bill that aims to positively impact the LGBTQ community. This bill would ensure the complete recognition, inclusion, respect, and protection of the rights of all LGBTQ individuals, including but not limited to the right to vote, free speech, fair and equal treatment, and more.