english, essay

Hello. I'm working on an essay on which is better?- online school or brick and mortar school. I'm having difficulties coming up with an introduction sentence, however I do have my thesis. Thesis: For high school students, brick and mortar school is a better option than online school because x, y, z.

1. I came up with one, please give feedback!
Many parents struggle to decide on whether they should send their child to a brick and mortar school or online school.

posted by hotdognibba70
2. Hate school? Hate bossy teachers? Hate getting up in the morning? Thinking of trying online school?

posted by Ms. Sue
3. That's a good straight-forward beginning.

posted by Ms. Sue
4. Thank you. :) My argument is that public school is better than online though haha

posted by hotdognibba70

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