sra JMcGuin spanish

Can you also look at the ENglish grammar I may have missed something thanks -

El evento más importante para mí del año pasado fue cuando entregué mi proyecto de historía. When I was in eighth grade history in Ms. Harvey's class, I had spent three months working on my report. The day the report was due; I was nervous as I had to do a presentation. I received an A for my work. This showed me that I was capable of getting a good grade on a challenging project. In addition, another important event is how badly the U.S. economy is doing.

El evento más importante para mí del año pasado fue cuando entregué mi proyecto de historía. Cuando yo estaba en grado oche de la clase historía con la Señorita Harvey. Yo trabajé tres meses en me informe. El día cuando se debió el informe, yo nerviosa y alegre de mi trabajo. Eso me enseñó que yo era capaz a de conseguir un buen grado en un proyecto difícil. También, ortro evento importante es que la economía en Los Estados Unidos es muy mala.

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  1. You missed a few of the errors I corrected before.
    en grado oche de la clase historía = en el grado ocho de la clase de historia (spelling of ocho and adding "de" between clase and historia)
    en me informe = en mi informe (spelling)

    yo nerviosa y alegre = you left out the verb = yo estaba nervioso y alegre (be sure adjective is "nervioso" because you are male, not female)

    yo era capaz a de conseguir = (you must drop "a") = yo era capaz de conseguir

    (not grade, like 8th grade, but nota = a grade you get of A, B, etc.) = un buen grado = una buena nota

    (otro is still misspelled) = ortro evento = otro evento

    The rest is fine!


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