please proof read this paper and tell me the changes that i could make to revise it
The Dark Knight was the most popular film of 2008. Unlike most popular summer movies it was also considered to be a quality film and was thought to be a contender to earn an academy award nomination. Ultimately that honor was not bestowed on the film, but it’s popularity and ability to elevate the comic book film, which is rarely associated with quality storytelling, remain.
The film is a continuation of the direction that Batman Begins took. It showed a darker version of Batman than the one seen in the Timothy Burton and Joel Shumacher films. The core unit responsible for Batman Begins also made The Dark Knight. Specifically the director, Christopher Nolan, the writer David S. Goyer and the stars such as Christian Bale, Gary Oldmand, and Michael Caine all played a role in both of the films with the only exception being Maggie Gyllenhall replacing Katie Holmes and Heath Ledger playing the Joker in one of his last roles, which will be remembered as an excellent performance and one which earned him an academy award after he had passed away.
What makes The Dark Knight fairly unique among comic book movies is the focus on acting and storytelling. The acting is impressive across the boards. Bale, Oldman, Ledger, Caine, Morgan Freeman, and Aaron Eckhardt all excel in their roles. Unlike most comic book movies the actors are given moments to showcase their acting abilities.
The cinematography followed the look established in Batman Begins by using subdued colors, lots of darkness and a more restrained visual style than the one seen in the late 80s and 90s. In many ways the new style of the two more recent Batman films can be seen as an attempt, which at this point must be considered succesful, to distance the franchise from the negative connotations that Batman and Robin had.
Wikipedia wrote the following about the film: It was greeted with positive reviews upon release, and became only the second film to earn more than $500 million at the North American box office, setting numerous other records in the process. It is also the fourth highest grossing film worldwide and only the fourth film to earn more than $1 billion, worldwide.
In conclusion, I hope that you have enjoyed this paper and take the opportunity to see the movie soon. You will enjoy it.
You are a cheat. This essay was posted over a year ago. http://www.englishforums.com/English/ExplainingChangesWouldRevise-Paper/xbckw/post.htm
Go somewhere else to cheat. I just do not understand why Axia students feel compelled to cheat, and post the cheating online as if others will admire it. Shame, shame, shame.
if you knew anything you woulg know that im not coping the eaasy i need help proof reading it because i donot see any thing wrong with it
I don't see any difference between the first paragraph posted a year ago in the english forum that Bobpursley linked above and your essay.
"The Dark Knight was the most popular film of 2008. Unlike most popular summer movies it was also considered to be a quality film and was thought to be a contender to earn an academy award nomination. Ultimately that honor was not bestowed on the film, but it’s popularity and ability to elevate the comic book film, which is rarely associated with quality storytelling, remain."
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you don't understand is HE NEEDS HELP WITH A PROOF READ!!!!
Sure! Here are some changes that can be made to revise the paper:
1. In the first paragraph, consider breaking the sentence "Unlike most popular summer movies it was also considered to be a quality film and was thought to be a contender to earn an academy award nomination" into two separate sentences for better clarity and flow.
2. In the second paragraph, change "it's" to "its" to show possession.
3. Consider restructuring the sentence "Specifically the director, Christopher Nolan, the writer David S. Goyer and the stars such as Christian Bale, Gary Oldmand, and Michael Caine all played a role in both of the films with the only exception being Maggie Gyllenhall replacing Katie Holmes and Heath Ledger playing the Joker in one of his last roles, which will be remembered as an excellent performance and one which earned him an academy award after he had passed away." to improve clarity. Separate the information about Maggie Gyllenhall and Heath Ledger into their own sentences for better organization.
4. In the fourth paragraph, consider rephrasing the sentence "The acting is impressive across the boards" to something like "The acting performances are impressive from the entire cast" to avoid using a cliché.
5. In the fifth paragraph, change "succesful" to "successful" for correct spelling.
6. In the last paragraph, consider rephrasing "In conclusion, I hope that you have enjoyed this paper and take the opportunity to see the movie soon. You will enjoy it" to a stronger concluding statement that summarizes the main points discussed in the paper.
Remember to also proofread for any grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors throughout the paper.