Could someone tell me if the punctuation in this sentence is correct?
We received a tour of the offices after which, we met in the conference room where and Jane joined the group.
Could someone tell me if the punctuation in this sentence is correct?
We received a tour of the offices after which,<~~move this comma; it should be after "offices" we met in the conference room where and Jane joined the group.
Other than that one comma change (really two, I guess -- one to add and one to delete), the rest looks fine.
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It makes sense, but you would be better to put the comma after 'offices' instead of 'which', and to use the word 'and' instead of 'where'. eg. We received a tour of the offices, after which we met in the conference room and and Jane noined the group.
Yes, punctuation in the sentence needs to be corrected. Here's the corrected version of the sentence:
"We received a tour of the offices. After which, we met in the conference room, and and Jane joined the group."
To determine if the punctuation in a sentence is correct, you need to follow the rules of punctuation. In this case, we can identify a few errors:
1. The comma after "which" should be moved to follow "offices" to separate the two independent clauses.
2. The word "where" should be replaced with "and" to indicate that meeting in the conference room and and Jane joining the group are two separate actions.
To correct the sentence, use a period after "offices" to end the first sentence. Then, use a comma after "room" and "group" to separate the clauses. Finally, replace the word "where" with "and" to indicate the separate actions.
Overall, it's important to carefully read and understand the meaning of the sentence, and apply the appropriate punctuation rules to convey that meaning accurately.