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I wrote this email, but I would like to know if it is good

You have a received this email from your American friend.
My family and I want to come to Lima for some days. We’ve heard a lot of Peruvian cuisine and we’re excited to try the most typical dishes. Could you please, recommend us some places where we could try traditional Peruvian food? And we’d also appreciate if you could give us some ideas about what other interesting things we could do in your city?

Hi Anna,
Thanks for your email. I am so glad that you are planning to visit my country. I am writing to give you some essential tips to have a pleasant stay here.
Firstly, the food variety in Colombia is very diverse. In my town, there are many restaurants that suit all tastes but the most popular and affordable for Colombian people is roasted chicken. The price will depend of the kind of restaurant, however, most of the restaurants are reasonable. In addition, my town is located close to the river bank, so I recommend the sea restaurants. The atmosphere is pleasant, and the people very friendly.
After you settle down, here are a couples of places you might want to go to during your week here. There are the beaches in the north of the country. Lots of people go there in summer to get away from the city. Secondly, there are a lot of beautiful old buildings and museums, I will recommend you visit The Houses of Parliament, President Palace, The Cathedral, and the Museum of Art.
I hope that’s useful. Good luck and let me know when you are coming.
See you soon.

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asked by Sadeek
  1. Hi Anna,
    Thanks for your email. I am so glad that you are planning to visit my country. I am writing to give you some essential tips to have a pleasant stay here.
    Firstly, the food variety in Colombia is very diverse. In my town, there are many restaurants that suit all tastes, but the most popular and affordable for Colombian people is roasted chicken. The price will depend of the kind of restaurant, however, most of the restaurants are reasonable. In addition, my town is located close to the river bank, so I recommend the sea restaurants. The atmosphere is pleasant, and the people very friendly.
    After you settle down, here are a couples of places you might want to go to during your week here. There are the beaches in the north of the country. Lots of people go there in summer to get away from the city. Secondly, there are a lot of beautiful old buildings and museums. I will recommend you visit The Houses of Parliament, President Palace, The Cathedral, and the Museum of Art.
    I hope that’s useful. Good luck, and let me know when you are coming.
    See you soon.

    Good writing. Just a few punctuation corrections.

    posted by PsyDAG
  2. First of all, when did Lima get up and move to Columbia? The first email requesting recommendations is very poorly written. The answer, to Anna, is better. Would you like us to critique both?

    posted by Reed
  3. thanks Tutor

    posted by Sadeek

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