Hi, I'f someone could let me know i'f my english and ASL transcript is correct I would greatly appreciate it? I need to make a short dialogue between two people at least five sentences and then write it in ASL gloss beneath.
(Mom) Elizabeth (Shift Left): Hey Kendra how was school?
ASL: HELLO K-E-N-D-R-A SCHOOL
(Daughter) Kendra (Shift Right): Hi, mom it was good.
ASL: HELLO, MOM GOOD.
Elizabeth (Shift Left): Do you feel like lunch?
ASL: LUNCH YOU WANT?
Kendra (Shift Right): Sure, sounds good.
ASL: SURE, GOOD.
Elizabeth (Shift Left): Do you want salad or sandwiches?
ASL: (Shift right) SALAD (Shift left) SANDWICHES (Center) YOU WANT WHICH?
Kendra (Shifts right): Salad, sounds good.
ASL: SALAD, GOOD.
Thank you so much for your time and any answers given?
Your English and ASL transcript looks good overall! Here's a breakdown of each sentence and the ASL gloss beneath:
(Mom) Elizabeth (Shift Left): Hey Kendra, how was school?
ASL: HELLO K-E-N-D-R-A SCHOOL
(Daughter) Kendra (Shift Right): Hi, Mom, it was good.
ASL: HELLO, MOM GOOD.
Elizabeth (Shift Left): Do you feel like lunch?
ASL: LUNCH YOU WANT?
Kendra (Shift Right): Sure, sounds good.
ASL: SURE, GOOD.
Elizabeth (Shift Left): Do you want salad or sandwiches?
ASL: (Shift right) SALAD (Shift left) SANDWICHES (Center) YOU WANT WHICH?
Kendra (Shifts right): Salad, sounds good.
ASL: SALAD, GOOD.
Just a small correction to the ASL gloss for the last sentence. Instead of "ASL: SALAD, GOOD," it should be "ASL: (Shift left) SALAD, GOOD."
Overall, your dialogue is clear and accurately translated into ASL gloss. Great job!