I looked around to see the Munchkins desperately running away, they screamed and rushed into their homes. The summer sun felt hot on my skin. “I thought you said she was dead” said a girl I’ve never seen before, “that was her sister the Wicked Witch of the East that is the Wicked Witch of the West, she worse than the other one was.” said Glinda. I was in fount of a house that had been dropped on my sister only showing her feet. “Who killed my sister,” I growled in a low tone as I stepped closer to Glinda and the unknown girl with two curled pigtails and a little brown dog. “Who killed the wicked witch of the east?” I said louder. The girl stepped back with a feared expression “was it you?” “No… no it was an accident, I didn’t mean to kill anybody!” the girl said, “Well my little pretty, I can cause accidents too!” I was ready to lunge at her but Glinda interrupted, “Aren’t you forgetting the ruby slippers?” Glinda said with a menacing smile. I had wanted those slippers for years now, it has powers greater than oz. What if I finally am able to get those shoes? I thought for a second. “The slippers, yes the slippers” I crept back to the house that had flatted my sister but as I got close to her feet the ruby slippers disappeared and her legs with stripped stocking shriveled up and under the house. “They’re gone!” I said shocked, “The ruby slippers, what have you done with them?” I stomped back near the two, “give them back to me or I’ll-“ “it’s too late,” Glinda interrupted “there they are and there they’ll stay.” Glinda said gesturing her wand to the auburn haired girl’s feet. The feet that had MY slippers in them! “Give me back my slippers, I’m the only one who knows how to use them. There no use to you, give them back.” “Keep tight inside of them, there magic must be very powerful, or she wouldn’t want them so badly.” Glinda whispered to the girl, “You stay out of this Glinda or I’ll fix you as well!” Glinda laughed mockingly, “Rubbish, you have no power here, be gone before someone drops a house on you too!” I ducked in fear, “Very well I’ll find my time.” I turned to the girl “And as for you my fine lady, its true I can’t attend you here and now as I like, but just try to stay out of my way, just try. I’ll get you my pretty, and your little dog too!” I was ready to leave when “wait!” the girl shouted at to me. I turned, “I just want go home, my names Dorothy and I believe even the wickedest of witched deserves something to remind her of her sister.” I was wondering where she was going with this. “If you help me find the wizard I’m sure he can get the slippers off my feet and I can go home too!” the idea isn’t half bad I thought. “Very well then” I said, “let’s find the wizard”
First, dialogue is written in separate paragraphs.
Glinda said, "(whatever she said)"
"(whatever I said)"
It's confusing all run together. In fact, this is hard to read with no paragraph separation. As this stands, I'm not sure who is saying what.
Your grammar needs help, too. And this is not an essay. It is a story/fiction. An essay is non-fiction presenting and defending a point of view.
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In order to find the wizard, Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West can follow these steps:
1. Start by asking the locals: Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West can start by asking the Munchkins or any other residents of the Land of Oz if they have any information about the whereabouts of the Wizard. They can seek help from Glinda, who seems to have knowledge and power in the land.
2. Consult the yellow brick road: Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West can follow the iconic yellow brick road, which leads to the Emerald City where the Wizard resides. The road is said to be the most direct route to the Wizard's location.
3. Look for signs and landmarks: Along the yellow brick road, Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West should keep an eye out for any signs or landmarks that might lead them to the Wizard. They can ask for directions from any encountered characters or creatures.
4. Seek help from other characters: Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West can interact with other characters they meet along their journey, such as the Scarecrow, Tin Man, and Cowardly Lion. These characters may have valuable information or even be able to assist in finding the Wizard.
5. Use magic to locate the Wizard: As a witch, the Wicked Witch of the West possesses magical abilities. She can use her powers to try and locate the Wizard or sense his presence. If she has a particular spell or object that aids in locating individuals, she can use that as well.
By following these steps, Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West can navigate through the Land of Oz and find the Wizard who might be able to help remove the ruby slippers from Dorothy's feet, allowing her to return home.