can some please help me edit my story.

I looked around to see the Munchkins desperately running away, they screamed and rushed into their homes. The summer sun felt hot on my skin. “I thought you said she was dead” said a girl I’ve never seen before, “that was her sister the Wicked Witch of the East that is the Wicked Witch of the West, she worse than the other one was.” said Glinda. I was in fount of a house that had been dropped on my sister only showing her feet. “Who killed my sister,” I growled in a low tone as I stepped closer to Glinda and the unknown girl with two curled pigtails and a little brown dog. “Who killed the wicked witch of the east?” I said louder. The girl stepped back with a feared expression “was it you?” “No… no it was an accident, I didn’t mean to kill anybody!” the girl said, “Well my little pretty, I can cause accidents too!” I was ready to lunge at her but Glinda interrupted, “Aren’t you forgetting the ruby slippers?” Glinda said with a menacing smile. I had wanted those slippers for years now, it has powers greater than oz. What if I finally am able to get those shoes? I thought for a second. “The slippers, yes the slippers” I crept back to the house that had flatted my sister but as I got close to her feet the ruby slippers disappeared and her legs with stripped stocking shriveled up and under the house. “They’re gone!” I said shocked, “The ruby slippers, what have you done with them?” I stomped back near the two, “give them back to me or I’ll-“ “it’s too late,” Glinda interrupted “there they are and there they’ll stay.” Glinda said gesturing her wand to the auburn haired girl’s feet. The feet that had MY slippers in them! “Give me back my slippers, I’m the only one who knows how to use them. There no use to you, give them back.” “Keep tight inside of them, there magic must be very powerful, or she wouldn’t want them so badly.” Glinda whispered to the girl, “You stay out of this Glinda or I’ll fix you as well!” Glinda laughed mockingly, “Rubbish, you have no power here, be gone before someone drops a house on you too!” I ducked in fear, “Very well I’ll find my time.” I turned to the girl “And as for you my fine lady, its true I can’t attend you here and now as I like, but just try to stay out of my way, just try. I’ll get you my pretty, and your little dog too!” I was ready to leave when “wait!” the girl shouted at to me. I turned, “I just want go home, my names Dorothy and I believe even the wickedest of witched deserves something to remind her of her sister.” I was wondering where she was going with this. “If you help me find the wizard I’m sure he can get the slippers off my feet and I can go home too!” the idea isn’t half bad I thought. “Very well then” I said, “let’s find the wizard”

I looked around to see the Munchkins desperately running away, they screamed and rushed into their homes.

(This part is very out of place.)
The summer sun felt hot on my skin.

(I don't think Glinda said this first part here. It was Dorothy.)
“I thought you said she was dead(,)” said a girl I’ve never seen before, “that was her sister the Wicked Witch of the East that is the Wicked Witch of the West, she (is) worse than the other one was(,)” said Glinda.

Try using these tips to improve the rest. I'm not allowed to do it all for you. I just used the first part as an example of how you can improve.

I can help you edit your story! Here are some suggestions to improve the flow and clarity of your writing:

1. Consider breaking up the story into paragraphs to create clear sections for different events and dialogue exchanges.

2. Use more descriptive language to immerse the reader in the scene. For example, instead of saying "the summer sun felt hot on my skin," you could say "the scorching summer sun beat down mercilessly, searing my skin."

3. Provide more context and details about the characters and their surroundings. This will enhance the reader's understanding of the story. For example, describe the appearance of the unknown girl with two curled pigtails and the little brown dog.

4. Be careful with punctuation and capitalization. Make sure to end all dialogue with appropriate punctuation, capitalize the first word of each sentence, and use proper capitalization for character names (e.g., Glinda, Oz).

5. Clarify the relationship between the Wicked Witch of the East and West. It seems like there may be some confusion in the dialogue. Make it clear that the protagonist's sister was killed by the house dropped by Dorothy, and now the protagonist seeks revenge.

6. Consider adding more internal thoughts and emotions for the protagonist to make their motivations and actions more understandable to the reader.

7. Ensure consistent verb tense throughout the story. It appears to be written mostly in the past tense, so make sure all verbs match this tense.

8. Consider providing more background information about the ruby slippers and their significance. Explain why the protagonist desires them so much and what powers they possess.

9. Elaborate on Glinda's wand and its role in the story. How does it affect the ruby slippers? Why does Glinda have control over them?

10. Flesh out Dorothy's proposal and her reasons for seeking help from the protagonist. Give more insight into their potential alliance and how it benefits both characters.

Remember to review the story for grammar and spelling errors as well. Good luck with your edits!