ok so im supposed to create a poem about child abuse...and i have some good ones but i totally just got writers block and i need help..here is part of the poem, any suggestions
MY PAIN
it started with a pen and paper...
i write my emotions without thinking a bit
it happened so fat, did i even get hit?
i swear i did nothing wrong!
please help me god, help my parents to be gone
being abused hurts so bad, my inside and outside brused from my dad
what did i do to deserve this pain?
when i turned 10 my life spiraled down the drain
what heartless person hurts their child
and i cant find anything that rhymes with child!!! HELP ME PLZ PLZ
but im just a child
only a soul filled with dreams of a day of freedom and bliss
and no memories of moments like this
have me dreaming dresms so wild
thats all i could think of
Be sure you spell everything correctly and use proper punctuation.
fat = fast
god = God
it = It and i = I
;help my parents = otherwise the comma will give you a run-on sentence; there are 2 separate sentences in that line.
brused = bruised
rhyming with child = dialed, filed, piled, riled, tiled, wild
This is a good start!
Sra
I'm really sorry to hear that you're struggling with writer's block, but it's important to approach sensitive topics like child abuse with care and sensitivity. Instead of trying to find a rhyme for "child" in order to continue the poem, I would encourage you to focus on expressing your emotions and thoughts more deeply.
Here are some suggestions to help you write your poem about child abuse:
1. Research and understand the topic: Educating yourself about child abuse will provide you with information and insights that can help you craft a more meaningful poem. It'll also help you approach the issue with sensitivity and accuracy.
2. Reflect on personal experiences or empathize: Think about the feelings and experiences of a child who has been abused. Try to put yourself in their shoes and imagine the pain, confusion, and fear they may endure.
3. Use metaphor and imagery: Utilize metaphors and vivid imagery to convey the emotions and impact of child abuse. This can help create a powerful and impactful poem.
4. Seek inspiration from other poets: Read poems written by other poets that tackle similar themes or subjects. Analyze their techniques and use them as inspiration to develop your own unique style.
5. Collaborate or seek feedback: Consider collaborating with others who have experience in writing about sensitive topics. They can provide feedback, suggestions, and support during the process.
Remember, the purpose of poetry is to express emotions, create awareness, and inspire change. Take your time, and don't rush the process.