Hello!

Is this good thesis? How can I make it better?

I would recommend this novel to other readers because it is mysterious, appeals through emotions, but hard to understand some of the context.

Thank you.

That's a recommendation, not a thesis!

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Read through this entire webpage, the bad and the good. Then rewrite yours.

Let us know what you write.

And here's a video that will explain the difference between a topic and a thesis:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kR3KRwaRVZs

Watch and listen carefully!

Hello!

Your thesis statement is a good start, but it could be improved for clarity and specificity. Here's a revised version:

"I highly recommend this novel to other readers due to its ability to evoke a sense of mystery and engage readers on an emotional level. However, it is worth noting that some aspects of the context may present challenges to understanding."

In this revised statement, I have addressed the main points of your original thesis while also providing more precise language. By mentioning the novel's ability to evoke a sense of mystery, it gives the readers a better idea of what they can expect from the book. Moreover, mentioning the emotional engagement will appeal to a wider range of readers who may be looking for a more immersive reading experience. Lastly, acknowledging the "challenges to understanding" adds an additional layer of complexity and intrigue to the novel, but it also manages readers' expectations.

Remember, a strong thesis statement should clearly and concisely express your opinion or argument, while also giving readers a preview of what to expect. It is usually better to provide more specific details rather than vague generalities.