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1) Cell phones are becoming increasingly popular and are in use almost anywhere one goes.

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  1. Sounds possible, but how will you support this thesis?

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  2. Cell phones become increasingly popular and use almost anywhere.

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  3. That's not really a thesis statement because you don't take any arguable position about anything. You have stated facts, but that's about all.

    Read through these -- http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html -- especially the first two.

    Then try again.

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