French

This is a poem. I did include alliteration, imagery, metaphor or simile to add some fig. language.
Can you fix any mistakes I have. Btw, this is a poem written from Cyrano's perspective to Roxane. (common french book :)

1. Oh mon amour, ma belle Roxane.
2. Sur mon cahier
3. sur ces mots écrits
4. Au beau milieu de la nuit
5. Où dans mes rêves les plus fous

6. Savourant cet instant si doux
7. Mots de désir et d’amour
8. à partir de nouveaux jours
9. avec votre belle présence
10. Je pense à toi

11. J’entends ta voix
12. Souvent je me surprends à rêver
13. Vous êtes belle comme une fleur épanouie
14. à ton sourire émerveillé
15. oh mon amour, ma belle Roxane

16. Je suis si seule sans toi
17. Mon amour! Sans toi
18. Je n’ai plus personne à aimer
19. Oh mon amour, ma belle Roxane
20. Véritables lettres d’amour que vous lisez étaient de moi
21. Ma vérité honnête de vous mon amour, Roxane.

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  1. Is this your translation from English?

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    Ms. Sue
  2. Yes.. but it's not exactly like the english way in which you'd read it.

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  3. I'll send this to our French expert, SraJMcGin.

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    Ms. Sue
  4. 1. Oh, (comma)

    15 Oh, (comma)

    19. Oh, (comma) = for direct address

    21. de vous, (comma) mon amour

    16. Because Cyrano is writing this, keep in mind that he is masculina. Therefore "seule" need to be "seul."

    Everything else looks OK.

    Sra (aka Mme)

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