When you add sugar to it, your cup of coffee becomes not only sweet, also fattening.
which part is wrong??
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is wronh one??
The statement "When you add sugar to it, your cup of coffee becomes not only sweet, also fattening" is partially incorrect. While adding sugar to your cup of coffee will indeed make it sweeter, the assertion that it becomes automatically fattening is not entirely accurate.
The incorrect part of the statement is the assumption that adding sugar directly makes the coffee fattening. The calories in coffee mostly come from the coffee itself, not the sugar. Black coffee is virtually calorie-free. However, if you add a significant amount of sugar, cream, or other high-calorie additives, then the coffee can contribute to weight gain.
To have a better understanding of the potential impact of sugar on the caloric content of your coffee, you can keep track of the number of calories in the added sugar and any other substances you use. It's also worth considering healthier alternatives such as natural sweeteners like Stevia or reducing the amount of sugar you add.
Remember, overall dietary patterns and lifestyle choices have a more substantial impact on weight management than a single cup of coffee with sugar.
Antecedents should occur in a sentence before any pronouns that refer to them. Which pronoun and antecedent need to be reversed in this sentence.
In addition, that last phrase ("also fattening") seems to be missing some kind of connection to the rest of the sentence. Read it aloud and think about what needs to be added here.