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Please see if this is written correctly. Let me know if I can say certain sentences in shorter phrases or simpler words or both.

Michelle Rodriquez es puertorriqueña y dominicana. Ella es famosa por ella las habilidades actuación. Ella es rebelde y de muchachas gamberras en películas de acción. Ella tiene cerca de ocho años de experiencia como actriz, pero antes trabajaba como extra en muchas películas. Ella da funcionamientos que obligan, y ella es carismática. Recomiendo su película llamada Girlfight en la cual ella se estrenó como la joven luchadora de boxeo enojada.

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asked by Lauren
  1. You still have not corrected that 2nd sentence = Ella es famosa por las habilidades de actuación. Ella es rebelde y hace los papeles de unas muchachas gamberras en películas de acción. Ella "da funcionamientos que obligan" = sorry but I don't know what this is tryibng to say. The rest is fine!

    Sra

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  2. P.S. I went back to your original post:

    Ella es rebelde y adquiere generalmente papeles de muchachas resistentes Ella es rebelde y hace los papeles de, etc.

    You just forgot a few words!

    Sra

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