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My therapist says it's (1)detrimental to my mental health to keep my thoughts bottled up inside of me, so I'll drop all (2) inhibition s and tell you about the newspaper office where I work.

Let me attempt to describe my managing editor first.It's sort of (3) cryptic that Ed is in communications because I've never met anyone harder to talk to. Although he's a proponent of clear expression, Ed communicates as unclearly as anyone I know. For example, if I say, "How are you doing today, Ed?" he'll give me some (4) ironic response such as "The tidal pools of time are catching up with me". I used to think there might be some deep wisdome (5) implicit in Ed's incoherent statements, but now I just think he's a little eccentric.
Then there's Seymour, our sportswriter. Seymour is perfectly normal except that he has unexplained fits of crying two or three times a week. In the middle of conversation about the baseball playoffs or the next heavyweight title fight,Seymour suddenly begins crying and (6)saturate s handfuls of Kleenex with his tears.
Now, I don't mean to (7) depict our office as a totally depressing place.It is not entirely (8) deficient in excitement, but even our excitement is little weird. It is usually provided by Jan, a (9) vindictive typesetter who, whenever she feels injured by Ed, takes revenge in some horrible but entertaining way.One of her favorite types of reprisal is sneaking fictional items about him into the society column. I'll never forget the time Ed was in the hospital after his appendix (10) rupture (e)d. He almost broke his stitches when he read that he was taking a vacation at a nudist colony.

The choices:
cryptic Deficient Depict Detrimental Implicit Vindictive
Inhibition ironic Rupture Saturate

You did it correctly. Good work!

Oh! I'm so glad I got it perfect!thanks

2 of them are wrong

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