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Which change, if any, should be made to this sentence?
"Though more snow is expected, she can make it through, and she'll deliver the supplies."
Delete both commas,change commas to semicolons, or make no change.

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asked by dana
  1. There is no change needed. However, the sentence would flow better if you deleted the ",and she'll".

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